his remains

Could his waters flow

south, from the gulf, drift down,

round the cape, to the east

Tasman coast where her

bare feet chill the wet sand?

4 Responsesso far.

  1. peterlebaige peterlebaige says:

    Second that, let’s the reader fill in several thousand kilometres thinking upon ‘those waters’ and their meeting with those ‘bare feet’!

  2. Mark Prisco Mark Prisco says:

    thanks John. The shorter it is, the less chance of stuffing it up, i suppose

  3. john keast john keast says:

    This proves, again, that some of the best work is brief.

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