New Zealand Poetry
Publishing Poetry from Aotearoa
only gods may breathe
that bright air beyond the stars
mortals are denied
could be right there, Mark. I wrote this for a short verse contest with a stipulated number of words. When I look at it yesterday before posting it crossed my mine that it might make a good beginning to something longer, but I did not think about removing any of it …. will think about it further. Thank you for taking an interest and for your suggestion.
like the 1st 2 lines. wonder if the 3rd could go, what do you think?
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