Would You?


I am a Camellia bud,

Who bows down to the railway
Would you come to see me by train?
Or
Would you walk to me?

3 Responsesso far.

  1. poetess says:

    poetess

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  2. Yeah, you are correct. Thank you for the compliment. 🙂

  3. Mark Prisco Mark Prisco says:

    hello,
    i like photo & first two lines. I think the last 2 lines would be tighter like this:

    Would you come by train
    or walk to me?

    And it’s simpler , more effective – without the clunkiness of the extra ‘would’ & the other words

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