Would You?

I am a Camellia bud,

Who bows down to the railway
Would you come to see me by train?
Would you walk to me?

3 thoughts on “Would You?

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  2. hello,
    i like photo & first two lines. I think the last 2 lines would be tighter like this:

    Would you come by train
    or walk to me?

    And it’s simpler , more effective – without the clunkiness of the extra ‘would’ & the other words

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