Meet me

Posted on 07/06/2018 by diliniwijenayaka

~ Meet me
Where the end begins
Where we
Buried our beaten hearts
Where we fell in love
Love at first sight!
In a moment
Where no one sees us
But you and me ~

6 thoughts on “Meet me”

Mark Prisco says:

09/06/2018 at 8:27 pm

hi,
i’d omit the 6th & last lines. i like the sentiment tho

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1. diliniwijenayaka says:
  
  12/10/2018 at 3:27 pm
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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Editor says:

08/06/2018 at 12:54 pm

Yes I enjoyed this also great to add a picture as well top marks

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1. diliniwijenayaka says:
  
  12/10/2018 at 3:24 pm
  
  Thank you very much for your nice compliment 🙂
  
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peterlebaige says:

07/06/2018 at 10:14 pm

I enjoy the enigma in this, meeting ‘where the end begins’ where ‘beaten hearts’ were buried. I cannot tell if it is the end or the beginning of love that’s happening. Enjoyed.

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1. diliniwijenayaka says:
  
  12/10/2018 at 3:26 pm
  
  Thank you and glad you enjoyed my poem 🙂
  
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